I held its own humor that made you go: whaaat theee heeellll.
GOOD!

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I'm sorry but this blows in every aspect. The flash had almost NOTHING to do with portal for one, and two, and the only thing that looked REMOTELY good was the portals. Nice try (i guess). Add better artwork, sound, and some relevence to Portal and try again.

1/10
0/5 (and what's with the name?! Its as bad as the guys vomit!)

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This was great guys. The way you incorporated all the different textures of cardboard into the everyday life of a city was really original. The two things that made me laugh was the "Emergency Rain Fan" for drying off the city and the spoof on cola.
Great work.

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New effects--
New feel--
Same awesome style!

Once again i am hooked. More variation, its like magic.
See what really gets me, in a good way (just has a good feel), is when you're listening to a song and just as you start to say "ok this is getting old..." it changes into something completely different and re-hooks you and gets your toe tapping again. And repeats that process throughout the song. Its like a drug: when it starts to wear off-- take another dose.

Like Gaia said, when i first heard the vox and arp, i thought of Daft Punk, just enough to put it in your mind and then blow it apart with something completely the opposite!
The beginning is very good-- heavy, but it still bounces, still has a feel you can get into.

As for the 3:10 part... all i can say is, you get a different taste depending on where you eat ( that sounds so wrong ) in other words-- Depending on your setup, from studio monitors to desktop speakers, each person is going to get their own sound from that part... Which is awesome if you think about it O.O

BUT (only one but, not big)
The song lacks an ending, for a 11:32 long song you think it would have a definite. ending. Honestly, I was listening to this song a few times before i finally realized it was looping, hah. ( this part loops itself very well ). But thats better for shorter songs. Unless you were going for a loop, then thats your thing. But, in my opinion was little bit of a let down, very little, but still.

OVERALL ( both songs )
VERY WELL COMPOSED!!!!! +35 !s
I've never heard this type of style, and you've caught my attention with it. It shows you have major skill in what your doing. ( i have serious writers block, but when it comes to mixing/mastering, don't count me out.)
And don't count you out either.

CHEERS and thanks for the experience,
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What he basically did was go to a concert ,and while everyone is cheering and dancing, stop the music and walk up to the mic, clear his throat and say: "I really don't like this music. Just thought I'd let you know. OH! But I'm being open minded, dont let it offend you!.... have a nice day!"
What a selfish dick... AND TO TOP IT ALL OFF... he didn't even listen to the full song- and he calls himself a critic, peh.

ANYWAY!
For a miscellaneous song, this thing sure as hell is miscellaneous, heh.
It started off slow with strings, and i thought it was going to be easy-going. But MAN it turned around! Threw in some breakbeats, some serious FX, and hella good mixing!
Every little genre change is matched with the synths and drums. Skill right there-- nothin less.

But (always a 'but')
Some of the sound effect were over used and the melody itself could have used a few variations to make it more interesting then it already is... and if you did that in part 2 more power to ya, because i didn't listen to it yet.

All in all, your good WAY overpowers the bad. Some serious mixing skills in this.
I mean, I've never listened to this style until your song grabbed my attention to all hell.
Listening to Part 2,
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I loved the sweep into the beginning, it pulls you right into the full feeling of the song. The arps initiate and it lulls you into a very rhythmic trance and the bass kicks along and makes you just close your eyes and go with it. The effects you used on the flute and the melody that went with it were nothing other than floawless. The ending was great! I can't think of any other way to say it except it places you back into your body.

This song puts you the state Trance is supposed to put you in, making you FEEL the song and not just listen to it. A lot of people who make this type of music could learn from you. Me being one... :)

Your ratings should be obvious.
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